The following scene is full of obvious exposition. Rewrite the scene using conflict, humor, or a confidante to replace obvious exposition SAL So when did you move to Cleveland? TED

The following scene is full of obvious exposition.  Rewrite the scene using conflict, humor, or a confidante to replace obvious exposition SAL So when did you move to Cleveland? TED About two years ago. SAL You are kidding.  I moved here two years ago myself. TED are you doing now? SAL I work for a large investment banker. TED I’m a successful umpire. SAL I love baseball.  But I have no time to go anymore, let alone play.  I used to be a pitcher on the bank’s softball team. TED I’m getting a little bored with it, actually. SAL How could you? Everyone loves baseball.  My kids especially do. TED I have no kids. SAL I thought you were married. TED I was. We divorced.  My wife was very selfish; she didn’t want to ruin her figure with children. SAL I have three great kids. TED That’s great. SAL One from each of my marriages.  But the third time is the charm; my new wife is a wonderful woman.

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