Hi Kenya, Your project was submitted at a 34% turnitin (TII) match.  This means that about one third of your paper is lifted or at least not properly cited.  Once I have excluded your references that does not appreciably reduce your TII match to an allowable level.  Therefore, I am assessing your work at a grade of zero and extending an offer of 48 hours for you to revise and resubmit your annotated bibliographies. Please submit by Thursday 9/3/20 by 9pm

Dear Professor [Name],

Thank you for your feedback on my project. I appreciate the time you took to review it and provide me with the Turnitin (TII) match percentage. I understand that a high TII match indicates that a significant portion of my paper may not be properly cited or may be lifted from other sources. I apologize for any unintentional errors in properly citing my sources.

After carefully considering your feedback, I realize that the extensive use of external sources in my paper without proper citation has led to the elevated TII match percentage. I sincerely apologize for this oversight and acknowledge that it is my responsibility to ensure the integrity of my work.

In order to address this issue, I would like to take this opportunity to revise and resubmit my annotated bibliographies within the given 48-hour period that you have kindly provided. I fully understand the importance of properly citing and referencing all sources used in academic work, and I assure you that I will make the necessary revisions to ensure compliance with your expectations.

To achieve this, I will carefully review my paper and cross-reference it with the sources I have utilized. I will pay close attention to accurately citing and referencing each source, following the appropriate citation style specified in the assignment guidelines. This will not only help me to reduce the TII match percentage but also strengthen the academic integrity of my work.

Moreover, I will also thoroughly review my paper to ensure that any information or ideas taken from external sources are appropriately paraphrased and referenced, in accordance with academic conventions. By doing so, I aim to demonstrate a thorough understanding of the topic and an ability to integrate external knowledge effectively into my work.

I appreciate the opportunity to revise my project and submit it again. I understand the academic expectations associated with the assignment, and I assure you that I will strive to meet and exceed those expectations with the revised version of my work.

Thank you again for your feedback and your understanding regarding my situation. I will submit the revised annotated bibliographies on Thursday, 9/3/20 by 9pm as requested. I am grateful for your guidance and assistance throughout this process.

Should you have any additional feedback or suggestions for improvement, I would greatly appreciate it. Your insights will be invaluable in helping me to enhance the quality and integrity of my work. I look forward to producing a revised version that meets your expectations.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]